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their this dick head that is my friend by the name of jariden or jj for short. the drug addict dumass keeps asking out this girl I like by the name of brin and I know he is going to mess her up and peer pressure her to do drugs. it piss me off a lot because I was going to ask her out before but my friend Chris did but he changed his mind. I always have thses problems with girls but brin told me she had the same problems that I did but I never told her I liked her at least not yet. some thing else happened too. This girl im friends with by name of lexi is dating this guy named Anthony and was hit with depression and thoughts of scuicide when she found out that he got drunk and tried to fuck three other girls. I guess they made up thought and got back tighter because before this he was so into her( yeah right). so as I lay around these girls as an orchid alone and watch them fall in love with the roses and watch their fingers bleed as they keep trying to pick them up oblivios to the millions of thorns they posses I lay and wonder if any of them will stop overlooking that orchid and stop smelling the poisonous roses that slowly kill them and take one swift sniff at that orchid and save them self's from a world of hurt( like that will ever happen though) 

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Austin Hawthorne
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United States
Love rock video games and poetry as well as art and musicall instruments like guitar
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T0mHiddlest0n Nov 26, 2013  Student Interface Designer
I appreciate that critique you did on the photo of me..  I just saw it, I'm sorry I never replied. But thank you, you're a talented writer.
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theultimatesina Nov 30, 2013  Student Artist
yeah its ok and I know im really good in English especially on the creative writing. my grammer can be off some times
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T0mHiddlest0n Nov 30, 2013  Student Interface Designer
Yah, me too! I know how you feel.
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theultimatesina Nov 30, 2013  Student Artist
good. now im not alone.
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StephanoHandler123 Oct 30, 2013  Student Filmographer
YO, check out the black albinos thing i made. (its aidan) and its on my prof btw
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Thanks for the fave.
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theultimatesina Sep 27, 2013  Student Artist
your welcome
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DeanIsBatman321 Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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theultimatesina Aug 16, 2012  Student Artist
what
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DeanIsBatman321 Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why did you call me an ass?
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